Wednesday, October 31, 2012


(USS Arizona Memorial, Aerial View)

Earlier this month, I had the chance to visit Hawaii, specifically the island of O’ahu.  I’d never been there before and hadn’t anticipated the large mass of people visiting Waikiki.  I’m a county girl now, and I enjoy my calm, laid-back lifestyle, so being in a big city isn’t easy for me anymore.  I don’t do very well around large crowds of people.  Usually I end up looking like a scared bunny until someone heckles me with the wares they’re hocking, turning scared bunny into angry bunny. 

There’s a lot to see in Waikiki, and I made many lasting memories during my time there, but nothing will stick with me more than the day I visited Pearl Harbor.  From the moment I checked my bag and walked through the gate, I felt a somber sense of gratitude and pride for my country.  The last time I felt that kind of passion was during my visit to Ground Zero a couple months after 9-11. 

Before touring the USS Arizona Memorial, I walked through the different museums, looking at artifacts, and stopping to watch a historical video depicting real footage from the day of the attack.  I stood in the doorway, my eyes glued to the screen, watching in horror as several bombs fell to the ground, destroying everything in their path.  In that moment, I teared up.  Not everyone felt as I did, though.  In the fourth row, a group of men pointed and laughed.  They weren’t American.  They felt differently.  The film continued.  The bombing was over.  I was now watching the aftermath.   It’s one thing to hear about it, it’s another to see it play out on a movie screen.  The men in the fourth row smiled, looking at one another like they wanted to give high fives.  At that point, I’d had enough.  I walked out.

About an hour later, I sat in an auditorium waiting for a boat to take my mother and me over to the USS Arizona Memorial.  A female tour guide shared some historical information and made one request; she asked everyone to behave in a respectful manner once they got inside the building.  She said the memorial center was no different than a cemetery, and that it should be treated as such.  We were counseled to lower our voices, showing consideration to the fallen ones.   

For those of you who don’t know, the USS Arizona is a battleship that sunk during the attack on Pearl Harbor.  It is the final resting place of 1,102 sailors who remain inside.  Also aboard that tragic day was 1.4 million gallons of fuel.  Even after all this time, around nine quarts of fuel still surfaces every day.  Survivors refer to it as “Black Tears.”

From inside the memorial building, the battleship sits right below the surface in all its grandeur and magnificence.  I peeked out the open window, almost feeling like I could reach out and touch the rusty exterior.  Over the next several moments I had the overwhelming sense that I had become part of something sacred.  The voices of others around me evaporated, making me feel like I was the only one there.  It wasn’t until I turned around that I noticed a few groups of people in the room had resorted to laughter, joking and treating the building like it was nothing more than a packed football stadium.  What happened to behaving in a respectful manner?   As they glanced in my direction, one of the groups understood my opinion about their thoughtless behavior.  I didn’t have to say a word.  I never do.  My facial expressions always give me away.  They’re like the gift that keeps on giving.  One member of the group said something to another in a language I didn’t understand, and then they all walked toward the boat that would ferry us back over to the museum. 

I respect all people from all walks of life.  I teach my children to judge others according to their actions, not by their color or where they come from.  Sometimes I forget that not everyone feels this way.  A death is a death, and in most instances, it should be a reminder to us that we are all part of humankind.  War is unfortunate, and I find myself wishing it could be another way.  World peace seems impossible sometimes, but I can’t help thinking about how nice it would be.  Until then, I leave you with this: Eventually we will all pass on from this life.  If we’re lucky, people will visit our graves, remembering a life that was once lived and a time that has long since passed.  When someone visits you one day, how would you like to be remembered?

Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Chapter One Submissions: October


What is it?

A contest for authors.

Each month I will be looking for the BEST first chapter of a novel. The winner will receive a $20 Amazon Gift Card AND will be interviewed on both my reader and writer blogs which have had over 30,000 page views in the past year. In addition, I will tweet about your book to my 20,000 followers and do a write up about why I chose your novel as my "chapter one" pick of the month. Read about the Chapter One winner for September HERE.

For this month, I will be accepting 50 entries. I might change this later...I need time to write after all ;) but I will do what I can to maintain this number. Once I receive 50, I will announce at the top of this post that submissions are closed for the month, so if you don't see that above, there's still an opening. Last month it was only open for two days, so don't wait around ;)


Comment on this blog post below. If you are one of the first fifty to comment, send the first chapter of your novel to my EMAIL ADDRESS.

In the subject line of your email put: CHAPTER ONE
And then please paste your chapter in the body of the email, and NOT as an attachment.

The winner will be emailed by the last week of the month, and look for their interview (and hopefully YOUR interview) the first week of the following month. If you were not chosen, you may submit the first chapter of a different novel the next month. Short stories are also eligible. BUT! Your book must be published to qualify.

Why am I doing this? Because once upon a time someone held my hand and showed me the way, and now I want to pay it forward.  One of my favorite things to do is promote up-and-coming authors. 

Best of luck to everyone!

September Chapter One Winner - R.J. Palmer

There were so many amazing entries in September for the Chapter One contest.  It was really hard to choose only one, but I was impressed with the writing of author RJ Palmer in the first chapter of her novel, Sins of the Father.  Her writing is compelling and strong, and the descriptions she uses to set the scene are excellent. 

Sins of the Father: Chapter One
Feudal England , Exact Date Unknown

Tortured screams echoed off the cold stone walls of the monastery and danced into the satin black of the night. Here and there from the confines of the bordering woods, wolves howled a lonely reply to the bloodcurdling cry that was carried on the cooling breeze, whispering a spell into the tops of the trees. In scant moments the screams were heard again, upsetting birds in their nests that sang an irritated song and were quiet again. Only one wolf answered this time, her response trailing off as if she were unsure from whence the call came, her ears flattening to the sides of her head in mild alarm. Her sensitive nose twitched delicately as she tried to identify the source of the malodor carried on the wind.

In the clearing where the great, imposing structure stood was also a village. No lights shone in the darkness from the direction of the cottages. The silvery light from the full moon that spilled in through crudely cut windows nevertheless revealed some of the villagers quickly crossing themselves before they hurried back to their beds to await the coming dawn.

From inside the hulking stone monastery came another agonized bellow and the flames on the torches in the wall sconces mounted at regular intervals flickered and bowed forlornly in deference to the wind that wafted unchecked through the halls.

In a small, windowless room situated off the library and secured by a massive oaken door, that was in turn hidden behind a rather large and ornate hanging tapestry, gathered a circle of perhaps twenty friars repeating a low and nearly indistinguishable prayer in perfect unison that had taken on the quality of a hypnotic chant. Their foreheads were furrowed with the concentration required to continue voicing their supplication in harmony and sweat beaded their brows as one friar drew back his arm to reveal a vicious looking whip. He brought it down again with a resounding crack on the back of the child, bound and quaking in their midst, who wailed in response. Malicious glee and a thirst for blood colored his countenance in sickly opposition to the piety of the chant that reverberated all around him.
“Bless the child…save the child…”
The chant was repeated as a litany and in tandem with the fall of the whip so that each time it was repeated, the crack of the lash sounded again and the child shrieked once more, his back marked by previous beatings too numerous to count.

Again the whip fell and the child, with a guttural groan of purest agony, collapsed at their feet and lapsed into unconsciousness.

One among the friars was charged with the keeping of a chalice of holy water, which he held aloft for a moment before pouring it onto the face of the child to rouse him.

The child coughed and sputtered, and then levered himself into a kneeling position andwith every muscle in his body straining, he struggled to stand. Holding himself upright bynothing more than sheer will, he faced the circle of friars with all the proud defiance he could muster.
The hate burning in the eyes of the friars which he faced gained intensity and he steeled himself for the blow he already knew was coming.

He didn’t have long to wait. He saw the shadow that fell on the wall as the friar standing behind him raised his arm. The friar brought it down and the boy shouted again as fire touched his back. He felt keenly the sticky warmth of the blood that began to drip down his back as this time, the lash laid it open. At least the gash didn’t hurt as badly as the burning welts, the boy reflected dimly as the lash fell once again and his hoarse keen of pain was all but drowned out by the exultant roar of the one who wielded the whip.
Trembling and nauseous, the child fought the urge to faint away as colors floated malevolently in front of his eyes. To faint again would bring only greater punishment at a later time, he knew, so he fought with every fiber of his being the black void that crept into the periphery of his vision. He was rewarded for his steadfast effort as the urge to vomit got stronger and the excruciating, razor edged agony that pulsed in the flesh of his back grew and throbbed increasingly with each beat of his heart, but he did not pass out.

Rage welled from deep within the core of his very being and the boy nursed it tenderly and solicitously. He had begun to understand long before that the fury kept him alive. He worked desperately and with a singular focus to force the pain into a dark corner of his mind, to lock it away so that he would feel the searing hurt though he would no longer acknowledge it.

The chant rose to a crescendo in his ears and the lash fell once more. Gritting his teeth and battling the need to cry out, the boy bore his whipping stoically. By his count, that was thirteen lashes, two more to go. The pious friars, he reflected with a poignant bitterness, never forced a whipping on him that exceeded fifteen lashes, though they also lashed him no less than every other night so that the welts would have just begun to heal when they beat him again and the cuts would be laid open once more to add to the multitude of scars that now crisscrossed his back.

The whip sounded and fire touched his back once again. Tears that he couldn’t control and yet fought to contain welled in his eyes and he bit his lip until he tasted his own blood. The tears would make the brothers happy he knew. He also knew that they would in turn feed the self-righteous bloodlust that seethed just beneath the surface of each of their carefully cultivated faithful mannerisms, and the very thought of satisfying or feeding the twisted need for pain and power that all the friars studiously disguised sickened him. Lifting his eyes to the ceiling, he refused to blink because he knew from experience that if he did not blink, the tears would not fall.
“Bless the child…save the child…”
The litany sounded again and the boy braced himself. Taking in the brothers that stood before him in a single swift glance, he saw that they had noticed the tears that he tried not to shed. Victory burned fiercely in their eyes and one gave the barest nod to the friar behind him, who brought the whip down on his back with a reverberant crack. Unable to help it any longer, the boy crumpled amid the circle of friars with a pathetic whimper of unendurable hurt.
Trembling with fury and sweating from exertion, the friar cast the whip aside and signaled that the child be taken away. His hands and feet still bound and his head hanging, shudders racking his body, the boy was grasped cruelly by the arms and hauled upright with no regard for the bruises, welts, gaping wounds, and brutally reopened scars that bled freely and glistened wetly in the firelight.

They dragged the beaten boy down a series of halls and passageways to his room, where they untied the leather straps and crudely laid him on his pallet on the floor. They draped a single wool blanket over him and watched with no small degree of triumph as he winced and murmured a soft plea for relief. Blood had already seeped through the wool of the blanket when one of the friars knelt beside the child and, in a last bid to indulge his sadism rubbed the boy’s back. The friar smiled with hateful glee when the boy gasped and tensed, whispering in the child’s ear, “Peace be with you and may God Almighty keep you, my child.” And then he left, his footsteps falling with nary a sound on the stone floor.

Dizzy with the stinging discomfort that pulsed in his back, the child levered himself upright far enough to move about six inches to his left. Into the bowl placed next to his pallet that served as a chamber pot, he threw up as quietly as he could manage. He collapsed back onto his bedding and passed out, oblivion caressing him gently and offering him an escape from the agony that he had neither the strength nor the will to refuse.
Want more?  Here's an interview with author R.J. Palmer...
1.       Tell me about yourself: Where are you from and how long have you been writing?
 I’m from Texas originally and I’ve lived all over the Midwest but that’s just kind of boring.  Being who I am and having been a writer for about ten years, I really want to spice that up a bit.  If I were a publicist, I would probably choose to jot down some little fluff that could loosely qualify as a biography based on the idea that there were small kernels of truth in there.  Something along the lines of, “Born in America and raised by traveling hippies…” Or some nonsense like that.  The truth is, I’m a relatively boring individual and don’t have much to say about myself and even if I did, it would lull a potential audience into a sound sleep after about the first two lines.  That seems kind of purpose defeating to me.
2.       Tell me about the novel—what inspired it?
 “Sins of the Father” was a gently nagging book idea in the back of my head for years.  I just never got the chance to translate it onto paper until I got a hold of a computer of my own.  I mean, let’s face it; no one is going to write the next potential best seller when they have no way to keep tabs on it, right?  I used to hear horror stories from people about how they got an idea as an artist, got excited, told someone about it and then found their idea plastered all over the place with someone else’s name on it.  I guess I just had time for the idea to take on greater shape and dimension and for me to mature enough to write “Sins of the Father” in the way it needed to be written.
It’s hard to say what exactly inspired the story itself because it wasn’t so much something I saw or experienced as it was a new step and a new challenge.  I got the idea right after I had finished writing my first work, “Birthright” and I was kind of at loose ends.  I didn’t know what to do next and someone gave me the brilliant idea to start my next novel.  It was a “facepalm” moment, honestly because I was sitting there asking myself, “Why didn’t I think of that?”  I mean, DUH!  “Sins of the Father” really is a compilation of experiences from several aspects of my childhood stuck into one place though my childhood was not nearly as difficult as was written.
3.       What genre do you write in and why?
I can’t even answer that because I really don’t know.  I just get a book idea and write it and people call it what they think it is.  That part isn’t up to me, that part is up to the audience.  Besides, if I limit myself, even if it’s genre specific, where’s the point in that?  That’s like saying that I’m only going to write a certain type of novel because that’s what other people think I should do or I’m going to refrain from writing in another genre because that’s what’s expected of me.  Did I just start to rail against “the man” there?
4.       What’s the next project for you?  Tell the readers about it.
I wrote a novel in my early twenties called “Birthright” which I’ve heard from several people that I left wide open for a series.  They were right and the twins’ story is one I’ve been concentrating on because I had a whole series of disconnected ideas running through my head for a couple of different books that I realized one sleepless night needed to be combined into one book.  I’ve never written a female main character before, new challenge there.
5.       Let’s put the novel aside and talk about YOU for a minute—what are your hobbies and what can’t you live without that’s non-book related?  What do you do when you are not writing?  If you could live anywhere in the world, where would that be?
Would it make me seem totally hermit like to say that I don’t have a great deal of my life that’s not book related?  If I’m not writing, I’m thinking about writing or I’m reading.  I even do stuff that would be called going through the day to day aspects of life; cooking dinner for the kids or general parent type stuff, but I really am constantly thinking about writing.  The only time I’m not thinking about writing is none of anyone else’s business because that’s between Albert and I.  ;)
I really don’t know where I would live.  You would have to ask me about me.  Picture me whining plaintively at this point because I write about other people SO much better!  I’m not sure that I would live anywhere besides where I am.  Don’t get me wrong, I would absolutely adore visiting Europe and England and I know that I have work to do in life that’s going to take me beyond the continental forty eight states, I’m just not sure when or where.  I haven’t gotten to that part yet.
6.       If a reader asked you to recommend the three BEST books to read, aside from your own, what would they be?
Can I recommend authors instead?  Because all the ones I can think of are part of a book series.  I supposed I could recommend the first in the series and let them take it from there.  Very well, here goes.  Read “Odd Thomas” by Dean Koontz, “A Wrinkle in Time” by Madeleine L’Engle and “A Spell for Chameleon” by Piers Anthony and then see if you don’t want to pick up the next book in the series and keep reading!
7.       If you could have dinner with one author, who would it be and why?
This is an obvious answer because I’ve never made a secret of the idea that I’m an avid and even a semi-obsessed Dean Koontz fan.  I just have to wonder truthfully if I would be able to eat anything with my stomach being all tied up in anxious knots or force so much as a squeak past my throat.  He’d have to do all the talking and for the first time in my life, I think I might be termed as monosyllabic or a rather dull conversationalist.  Of course, that would be AFTER I woke up from a dead faint.
8.       Post where you can be found—website, blog, twitter, facebook, etc.
September Chapter One Finalists
As I stated before, there were several stellar entries in September.  Here's a list of other amazing authors you'll want to check out:
Do YOU have an excellent Chapter One?  Enter the October Chapter One Contest HERE.